And ANOTHER Mistle Story (Prologue only, so far)

I’m not going to even bother putting this on private.

Well, I’ve had this idea for a story for some months now and I decided I should finally try doing something about it. The weird thing is, the storyline is kind of similiar to that of Pretty Little Liars which I started to read a month or so back now. IF ANYTHING IS SIMILAR TO THOSE BOOKS IN MY STORY, I did NOT intentionally steal it! That’s pure accident, if not my subconscious reprodcing something that I read; I was kind of surprised when I started to read the PLL books.

Yeah, JUST SAYING.

Even before the police car turned the corner, I could see the red and blue lights reflecting off of nearby houses. A pang of anxiety jolted through my chest as I caught a first glimpse of the house.

Soon enough the car I was in pulled up to the curb and slowed to a halt. I quickly pulled away from chewing the cuticle of my thumb, causing the skin to rip and bleed, when my door was jerked open by an officer. He wore a concerned look on his face as he began to ramble off a list of orders concerning me going inside the house. I nodded and let out slight responses at appropriate intervals whilst sucking on my thumb cuticle. It was stinging.

After the cop had told me everything necassary he stood aside, holding the door open for me. As I stood up, I took in the entire scene within seconds, everything from the various officers and detectives gathered in circles to the yellow security tape draped across the fences and mailbox, closing the house inside a quarantined box of investigation. The tape seemed to be screaming at me, “POLICE LINE DO NOT CROSS”. I then procided to cross the police line.

I knew the interior of the house like it was the back of my hand. I headed straight to the stairs, and in excitement I went to put my hand on the rail. Whoops, I thought. Better follow what the man said and not touch anything. For my own amusement, I let my fingers trace up the rail just quickly before pulling away and, upon reaching the top of the stairs, turned to my right and walking at a brisk pace towards the small, dark bedroom near the end of the main hallway. Near the middle of the hall was a gate looking down on the main floor of the house. My eyes flickered across a folded piece of paper wedged under a stone near the fireplace, and the thought of going to grab it crossed my mind. But I didn’t have time for that — the cops would come across it eventually on their own, anyway.

I tentatively pushed open the door. I had expected it to squeal and creak like it did in the scary movies, but it didn’t make a sound. It just slid silently, grazing the matted beige carpet.

Even though I knew what I was going to see inside, I still drew in a sharp breath when I saw the girl hanging there from the ceiling fan. Her hair hung down past her shoulders, close in colour to that of the walls. And as I looked on, I noticed she was ever so slightly turning in circles.

Like a rotisserie chicken. Like a small, slow-cooked rotisserie chicken that everyone could take turns picking at. Picking at until there was nothing left except the bones.

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37 Responses so far »

  1. 1

    Aqua said,

    Mistle, you’re a future bestselling author (:

  2. 2

    mistletow11 said,

    Hopefully not, because that means that our future will be full of poorly-written books that had a chance at being decent, given the story line.

  3. 3

    gamma076 said,

    So, did the site just die off about a month ago? I can’t find anyone on Friends Domain chat and I no one has posted here in a while. :( I wanted to say “Hi.” If you ARE reading this… “Hi!” Please reply…

  4. 4

    Fire said,

    sup bro, i still use this site but im not sure about anyone else, also people kinda grew up and out of FD

  5. 5

    gamma076 said,

    Ah. Has everyone like separated or what? I messaged Mistletow on dA and it says she hasn’t been on in weeks. So, she probably won’t get it. But it is good to here from someone.

  6. 6

    Fire said,

    she doesnt really use dA after a virus took hold of her computer, she does have an msn thing, i dont talk to her on it though mostly cause i use aim.

    and i know what you mean, i made the last comment on chat. i still check this place out to keep in touch with everyone.

    which brings me to ask, how have you been

  7. 7

    hunt70 said,

    This place is great.

  8. 8

    gamma076 said,

    Virus? That sucks. Do you know her MSN? I wanted to ask her about some design stuff I’ve been working on.

    It looks like I was about a month or two late coming back, because all the comments are from then.

    I’m actually doing really well right now. I’ve gotten into graphical design and I’m getting better pretty quickly (well I’ve been told). Here’s where I host all my stuff: http://www.dropr.com/epsilon/ – I use a different username there, because its changed a few times after I left here. That’s pretty much all thats going on with me… And you?

    Yup this place is pretty awesome, but I get caught up in it easily so I like to keep my distance and visit only every once and a while. I keep forgetting about it (don’t ask how) and then one day I’m looking back on stuff and remember it.

  9. 9

    gamma076 said,

    That’s weird. My last comment didn’t come up under most recent comments…

  10. 10

    Starway said,

    they grow up so fast!

  11. 11

    Fire said,

    har har yea.

    i mostly play RoM now. i played EE for the longest time but it got shut down

  12. 12

    Starway said,

    What is RoM

  13. 13

    Fire said,

    runes of magic another mmorpg that i got sucked into but this time im not going to pay for anything idc if frogster is doing well sparkplayer went down fast

  14. 14

    gamma076 said,

    Here’s my artwork so far: http://epsilon.dropr.com/

    Sadly, it MAY not work in that case here’s my dA (no photography, but whatever): http://rameses707.deviantart.com/

  15. 15

    Qt said,

    Hey :)
    It’s Qt, just checking up on everything.
    How’s everyone doing?
    I have to say, I kind of miss our scary story times etc…

  16. 16

    mistletow11 said,

    Today’s the day the teddy bears have their picnic.
    …Ahoy-hoy.
    So, does anyone here like HP? Harry Potter? Witching and Wizarding? DUMBLEDORE – Ron, Ron, Ron Weasley! I love it.
    I’m only on the third book but I’m making like a boat and motoring through them.
    The last book is so sad. So very, very sad. I found out something I wasn’t supposed to and my favourite character ends up dying. It’s so awful. I’m so obsessed with those books, though. They’re too good. 2 gud 2 b tru.
    So many bots come on here and spam it up, I just deleted/unapproved all their comments.

    <3 <3 <3

  17. 17

    mistletow11 said,

    …wow, nice avatar Mistle. I really need to update that.

  18. 18

    Fire said,

    why did you talk to yourself?

    hey qt, how are you

  19. 19

    Starway said,

    hi qttttttttttttttttt

    and merry almost christmas guyssss

  20. 20

    Fire said,

    merry xmas to you all too. hope you all have a safe and wonderful holiday

  21. 21

    Starway said,

    I want to send you all Christmas cards

    Is that creepy or

  22. 22

    Fire said,

    so fucking creepy im scared now, hiding in my closet in the corner with my dogs infront of me im that scared

  23. 23

    hunt70 said,

    That isn’t creepy Star, that is very thoughtful.

  24. 24

    Starway said,

    oh my god i thought that said drugs infront of me and i spit out my apple juice

    I’VE BEEN WATCHING TOO MUCH SKINS~*~

    It’s the eve of Christmas Eve

  25. 25

    Fire said,

    no it was drugs, they like it when i talk to them

  26. 27

    Starway said,

    OMG GUISE IM SO DRUNK LOLOL

    Just kidding, I’m rotting away on Tumblr because my family hates me.

  27. 28

    mistletow11 said,

    HAPPY BIRTHDAY, JESUS.

    Oh, right…you guys.
    Have a good Christmas. I did. It was wonderful. I got a super nice jacket and some other sw33t & kewl thangs that I love. I’m going out for Christmas dinner tonight. <3
    I keep thinking this site is dead and so I never check it. Sorry.

  28. 29

    mistletow11 said,

    p.s. Happy Kwanzaa or Hanukkah for anyone else. I can’t believe I forgot that, I’m so ignorant.

  29. 30

    Fire said,

    haha i thought you said pregnant mistle instead of ignorant.

    so far so good. though al had a bitch fit here, so basically normal.

    merry christmas to all

  30. 31

    mistletow11 said,

    …and to all, a good night!

  31. 32

    Fire said,

    dude fucking got me some nightmare before xmas feet pjs

  32. 33

    mistletow11 said,

    That is so decent.
    But enough about you, it’s time to talk about ME.
    h@rry p0tt3r 4ever <3
    It's so sad. SO sad. SO SO SO sad. The seventh book, that is. I won't tell you why or what, but it's so sad. So sad. I can't handle it.

  33. 34

    Fire said,

    brat =P

  34. 35

    mistletow11 said,

    <3 <3 <3 <3 ;___; <3 <3 <3 <3

  35. 36

    Fire said,

    i love you dont worry mom

  36. 37

    mistletow11 said,

    CRAP, I’M LATE ON THIS SITE.

    HAPPY BIRTHDAY, SEVERUS <33333 (Even though his birthday was on January 9th). <3333


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